There is no need to maintain a close relationship with distant relatives. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

An increasing number of

individuals

are facing the complicated problem which whether

need

Change the verb form

needs

show examples

to cultivate an intimate

relationship

Fix the agreement mistake

relationships

show examples

with distant

relatives

since the 21st century began because most

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

people are living in other cities even other countries. There are two opposite arguments had been existing in opponents. In my view, I do agree that the public does not need to maintain a close

relationship

with these kinds of

relatives

. First of all,

although

there are different types of advanced technologies that can be used to help

individuals

to chat with their loved ones, developing a close

relationship

via using technologists is limited and unreliable.

This

is because there are some activities that need to do in person and cannot satisfy accompanying needs.

For example

, a patient who is suffering from a serious fever needs someone to take care of him.

Moreover

, the latest scientific report from Psychological Newspaper revealed that physical contact is a necessary method to help humans to maintain close

relationships

;

Therefore

, technologies fail to keep intimate

relationships

between

individuals

and their distant

relatives

.

Secondly

,

individuals

have little

time

to communicate with their

relatives

due to

occupied schedules in modern society, because they already have various

relationships

that need to facilitate and maintain.

For instance

, the latest report from the Singapore Society Newspaper stated that up to 80% of citizens aged 20 to 40 years old complain about their lack of enough

time

. So many workers do not need to maintain close

relationships

with distant

relatives

due to

their shortage of

time

. In conclusion,

individuals

do not need to keep up a close

relationship

with distant

relatives

, because it is difficult for them to communicate with each other.

In addition

, they

also

do not have enough

time

to do

this

.