There is no need to maintain a close relationship with distant relatives. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

An increasing number of

individuals

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are facing the complicated problem which whether

need

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to cultivate an intimate

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relationship

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relationships

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with distant

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since the 21st century began because most

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people are living in other cities even other countries. There are two opposite arguments had been existing in opponents. In my view, I do agree that the public does not need to maintain a close

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with these kinds of

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. First of all,

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there are different types of advanced technologies that can be used to help

individuals

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to chat with their loved ones, developing a close

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via using technologists is limited and unreliable.

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is because there are some activities that need to do in person and cannot satisfy accompanying needs.

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, a patient who is suffering from a serious fever needs someone to take care of him.

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, the latest scientific report from Psychological Newspaper revealed that physical contact is a necessary method to help humans to maintain close

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;

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, technologies fail to keep intimate

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between

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and their distant

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.

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,

individuals

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have little

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to communicate with their

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due to

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occupied schedules in modern society, because they already have various

relationships

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that need to facilitate and maintain.

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, the latest report from the Singapore Society Newspaper stated that up to 80% of citizens aged 20 to 40 years old complain about their lack of enough

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. So many workers do not need to maintain close

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with distant

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due to

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their shortage of

time

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. In conclusion,

individuals

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do not need to keep up a close

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with distant

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, because it is difficult for them to communicate with each other.

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, they

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do not have enough

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to do

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.