the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
the graph illustrates the
develpoing
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developing
of
turesom
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tiresome
in
an
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caribbean
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Caribbean
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island
in the given period (2017-2019)
overall
, there is a gradual increase in the visitor
that is
comming
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coming
to the
island
. where we can see the total visitor go up to reach 3.5 in 2017.
to begin
,
with
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the visitor staying in crouse ships ,which has lowest in 2010,
it
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icrease
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increase
increased
moderately since 2012 to reach its highest
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point
in 2017 at 2
millions
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,
whereas
visitors staying on
island
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the island
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start from the middle between 0.5 and 1 and remain steady till 2011 where it
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to rise and level out at 1.5.except in 2016 when it
rduced
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reduced
slowly
then
it
returen
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return
returns
to its level again.
furthermore
, visitors total number have ascended from 1 in 2010 to aproxementlay 2.7 in 2016 after that it
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went
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up
significantaly
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significantly
to 3.5
at
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in 2017. more ever, 2017 was the best year for
this
island
because it
hold
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the highest number of tourists.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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