the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
the graph illustrates the
develpoing
of Correct your spelling
developing
turesom
in Correct your spelling
tiresome
an
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a
caribbean
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Caribbean
island
in the given period (2017-2019)
overall
, there is a gradual increase in the visitor that is
comming
to the Correct your spelling
coming
island
. where we can see the total visitor go up to reach 3.5 in 2017.
to begin
, with
the visitor staying in crouse ships ,which has lowest in 2010, Change preposition
apply
it
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apply
icrease
moderately since 2012 to reach its highest Correct your spelling
increase
increased
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in 2017 at 2 Correct your spelling
point
millions
,Change to singular
million
whereas
visitors staying on island
start from the middle between 0.5 and 1 and remain steady till 2011 where it Correct article usage
the island
begin
to rise and level out at 1.5.except in 2016 when it Change the verb form
begins
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slowly Correct your spelling
reduced
then
it returen
to its level again.
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return
returns
furthermore
, visitors total number have ascended from 1 in 2010 to aproxementlay 2.7 in 2016 after that it has
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apply
went
up Change the verb form
gone
significantaly
to 3.5 Correct your spelling
significantly
at
in 2017. more ever, 2017 was the best year for Change preposition
apply
this
island
because it hold
the highest number of tourists.Correct subject-verb agreement
holds
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