The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram demonstrates the steps of producing frozen fish pies.The process comprises two main arms , which
then
lead to one pathway to give the end product.
Looking from an overall
perspective it is readily apparent that the manufacturing of the given food item takes a lengthy process , using potatoes
and fresh salmon
as basic ingredients.Initially
treating potatoes
and salmon
take place in two different lines, and processed potato slices are dipped into a sauce
made with seasoned fresh salmon
at one point ,thereafter
they follow a similar pathway.
Simultaneously,potatoes
and fresh salmon
are delivered to the factory, which is up to one month and 12 hours from harvesting respectively.Then
potatoes
are cleaned using fresh water splinters and then
peeled and sliced into chips.These chips are boiled and chilled and stored to be wrapped with salmon
mixed sauce
.
On the other hand
, fresh salmon
is seasoned with salt and lemon juice before steaming in an oven.In the next step, skin and bones are removed manually and after ensuring they are thoroughly removed , pre-prepared peas and sauce
are mixed with the salmonAfterwards previously-stored chips are dipped in that particular sauce
.In the succeeding stage,they are packed and frozen prior to being stored and dispatched.Submitted by g.s.subasinghe on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potatoes, salmon, sauce with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dipped" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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