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Write a letter to a friend telling them about an interesting website you found. Tell your friend How you found it How it can help How you use it

#friend #website
Dear Jinsook, Hope you are getting well, I am writing
this
 letter to let you know that I found an interesting platform that
are
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appearling
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appearing
appealing
you
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. When I was searching the Internet yesterday, I was trying to find health information for my mother, as you know, my mother was in
hosptal
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hospital
 now because of
lumatism
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rheumatism
. She
have
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 suffered from that disease for a long time and the site is very useful for
lumatism
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rheumatism
 patients. There are a number of information
such
 as health
solution
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solutions
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, food for health and
introduction
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 of exercise for patients. I think
this
 site would be
also
 helpful for you because I
remeber
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remember
 that your father
have
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had the same
simpton
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symptom
symptoms
. When you have free time, look around
this
 site. I hope it would be good information for you and your father. Best regards, Bokhee
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