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You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: • Why you cannot pay the rent • When you will pay the rent. • How you will ensure you can pay your rent in the future

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to ask whether you can help, that can I pay my rent late. I have faced a problem recently
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 I earn money or I borrow from my friends. I pay rent in 10 days at the latest. What is more, I will try
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 situation. I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Bardiboyeva Nilufar
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structure
To enhance clarity and effectiveness, try structuring your ideas more coherently in paragraphs, clearly separating the explanation, the solution, and future actions.
grammar
Ensure you proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors and enhance readability.
content
Consider elaborating on how you plan to prevent similar situations in the future, providing more concrete steps or measures.
clarification
You have clearly communicated the main purpose of the letter.
tone
The use of formal language and appropriate salutations enhances the tone of the letter.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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