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some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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In Several nations, increasingly people are becoming interested to know about the houses or buildings they live in. There is a reason behind that,
also
this
 essay is going to be about effective ways that can follow to know about the
house
 they are living in.In the commence with, the tends to know for the history of a
house
 is becoming, so popular among people. It now becomes a kind of responsibility for them. Foremost, they show their curiosity is for being familiar with the
house
, the
house
 can be damaged by a natural
disaster
 it would be Hessel for Someone after a
disaster
. If
this
 is the case or wrong happens it would
easier
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 to prepare for the next
disaster
 to illustrate, my father previously knew about earthquakes, When he did Some observations about our
house
 he come to a point that he made a corridor to prevent himself from
this
 kind of
disaster
.
Furthermore
,
this
 makes the
house
 So Strong the value
it
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 the market always gets in a higher range.
on the other hand
, in spite of the talks with the owner about the
house
, it
also
 too high chance to owner is a liar. The more worthy war he can go for is discussing with the Residents of
this
house
this
houses
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 neighbour.It can make his work more smooth
although
 he gathers information about
this
house
 from the internet.
To sum up
, Before knowing about them when
house
 when in a case of it will ease their wore when they face extreme diester.
Furthermore
, the effective plan is to ask their neighbours about
this
house
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