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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstance of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some
people
 argue that for every type of
crime
, there must be a certain
punishment
. On the other side, the rest of them think that it is necessary to disclose the situation and reason that compel the criminals to commit crimes.
This
 essay will discuss both arguments, whether there should be a predetermined
punishment
 or not. From my point of view, external
factors
 should be taken into consideration
while
 judging a
crime
. Most
people
 argue that it is necessary to determine certain punishments for each type of
crime
. It would be just if everyone committing the same
crime
, undergo the same
punishment
. I believe
this
 measure will not only be unjust but
also
 may lead to inaccurate judgement
,
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 because in reality, there are many
factors
 that urge
people
 to commit crimes.
Moreover
,
this
 type of judgement displays equality rather than equity which may lead to injustice.
On the other hand
, others believe that external
factors
 should
also
 be judged
while
 considering
punishment
 for one's
crime
. Some
people
 may hurt or kill others to protect themselves and
this
 should be accounted as self-defence, not a
crime
. Yes, harming and unliving someone is against the law, but what if someone is suddenly attacked by a killer? Only by considering all relevant
factors
 just practice of law can be conducted.
To conclude
, the court should mindfully determine the right
punishment
 for each
crime
, as
punishment
 cannot be generalized.
Thus
, all
factors
 including the motivation and situation of the criminals should not be overlooked so there is not will not be any prejudice.
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