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List some of the causes and effects of global warming. Offer one solution that might slow or stop the problem associated with it.

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It is undeniable that global warming is one of the most challenging issues facing the world right now. In
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 causes and effects shall be discussed and solutions to the problem offered. First and foremost, global warming is caused by greenhouses energy released being released
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 the atmosphere thereby trapping heat and making temperatures warmer.
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 greenhouse
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 the end product of fossil fuels
such
 as coal and oil used in
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the production
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production
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energy
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. Car exhaust is
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 among the causes of global warming
due to
 the release of carbon dioxide.
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, deforestation
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 to
lack
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 of trees to absorb the harmful gases from the atmosphere.
Effects
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 of
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 activities have led to changes in the climate.
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 a survey released by National
geographic
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stated that
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 climate changes have led to an increase in
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sea water
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seawater
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 levels causing floods and leaving a wake of destruction behind.
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, climate change has affected rain patterns causing drought and
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planting
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the planting
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 season.
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, countries are encouraged to adopt alternatives sources of energy, which are clean and environment friendly,
this
 could be one way of mitigating global warming
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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