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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
 ever-changing life, children do not have to be in charge of becoming the breadwinner as children in the past did.
However
, it is paramount that youngsters should be motivated to have surplus responsibilities for some reasons. On the one hand,
children'
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career
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 cannot be fruitful if they do not experience or carry any duties. Without doing anything but enjoying throughout
the
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 youth, they will be disoriented,
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and clumpsy
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clumpsy
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clumsy
 and
consequently
 lose their core value. Their self-esteem would gradually vanish
due to
 the fact that they fail in every single effortless
tasks
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 which they could have acquired and gained experience in their teenage years. They would start to succumb subconsciously and become a parasite in
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society.
On the other hand
, the juvenile should not have too
much
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 responsibilities. They need to have time to fulfil their aims and have
a
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good academic performance.
Furthermore
, they ought to have more
oppoturnities
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opportunities
 to experience as many activities in
diverse
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field
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 with a view to
explore
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 their ability,
discover
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 every
edges
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 of themselves and they will
passionate
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something
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 eventually. To briefly conclude, every child
need
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 to have the amount of time to live
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 to their age and create memorable reminiscence.
Nevertheless
, their parents should have positive modifications to guide the best way to develop and utilize their time appropriately.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extra responsibilities
  • develop skills
  • life lessons
  • work ethic
  • sense of responsibility
  • contribute to
  • family
  • community
  • playtime
  • physical development
  • mental development
  • balance
  • enjoyment
  • guide
  • childhood
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