Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In

this

ever-changing life, children do not have to be in charge of becoming the breadwinner as children in the past did.

However

, it is paramount that youngsters should be motivated to have surplus responsibilities for some reasons. On the one hand,

children'

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career

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cannot be fruitful if they do not experience or carry any duties. Without doing anything but enjoying throughout

the

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youth, they will be disoriented,

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and clumpsy

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clumpsy

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clumsy

and

consequently

lose their core value. Their self-esteem would gradually vanish

due to

the fact that they fail in every single effortless

tasks

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which they could have acquired and gained experience in their teenage years. They would start to succumb subconsciously and become a parasite in

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society.

On the other hand

, the juvenile should not have too

much

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responsibilities. They need to have time to fulfil their aims and have

a

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good academic performance.

Furthermore

, they ought to have more

oppoturnities

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opportunities

to experience as many activities in

diverse

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field

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with a view to

explore

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their ability,

discover

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every

edges

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of themselves and they will

passionate

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something

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eventually. To briefly conclude, every child

need

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to have the amount of time to live

exact

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to their age and create memorable reminiscence.

Nevertheless

, their parents should have positive modifications to guide the best way to develop and utilize their time appropriately.