The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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diagram illustrates the process of producing instant Linking Words
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for marketing and it is an automated course with minimal manual labour.
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linear production yields instant Linking Words
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Initially
,flour is delivered to storage tanks through trucks and it is pumped into tanks ,prior to being mixed with oil and water in the mixture.Linking Words
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, the mixture is prepared as dough sheets using rotatory rollers.
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sticks during the next step using machines.Use synonyms
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stripes are packed into heat-proof containers to be cooked with oil.The following stage is the drying technique,which prompts the Use synonyms
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, vegetables are added to the Linking Words
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seasoned with spices before being stored in cups.Linking Words
Finally
, these cups are labelled and sealed to ensure the quality of the product.Linking Words
Then
it is ready for marketing.Linking Words
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