The diagram below shows how the Australia Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The diagram illustrates the way in which the department of Meteorology in Australia, maintains weather forecasts in a reliable and up-to-date manner using the latest technology. Looking from an

overall

perspective it is readily apparent that the country uses advanced technology to detect the changes in weather

such

as radar,satellite and data from drifting buoys to provide an accurate forecast after analysis.

Firstly

,incoming information from satellites provides visual images with regard to the changes in the atmosphere and these data are fed to computers.In the land, radars collect facts about the shifts in the environment and are directed to computers to generate graphical views that show the required details . Synoptic charts are created using atmospheric information from satellites ,radar data from the earth and oceanic changes from drifting buoys as a detailed report. Computers thoroughly analyze images , which are provided through satellite photos,radar screens,and synoptic charts to create a detailed record .

This

forecast is

then

delivered to the public using television,radio and record announcements.

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