People who buy friendly vehicles like electric cars should receive a subsidy on tax. This will discourage people from buying polluting cars and thus lower emissions. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

In the modern world, we have many options to
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vehicle
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. Many
people
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their
citizen desire to buy
a
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electric
car
because it can reduce many
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pollution
problems with can made from
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petrol
cars
.
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really agree with
this
statement was mentioned in
this
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, many
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the current time
consume
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a lot of normal
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with high consumption of
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petrol
and gas demands. In the same way, both had many
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effect
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from
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their
used
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such
as air
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pollution
or
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in the urban areas.
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, they found a new solution to fix
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that we called
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CAR
" but they had some
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to
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a success for everyone
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their
new solution, because
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, it has a high investment cost and
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impact
to
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a high
price
. The
middle class
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citizens don't have enough money to pay for a new
car
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immediately
becase
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because
of they had
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many
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before and if they had more expensive than
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car
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. They will desire to buy a gas
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more than
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an electric
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because
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of the
price
.
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, in many
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as
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Thailand, they don't have
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to support
a
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electric ecosystem.
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currently
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, all
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cars
take a lot of time to charge
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their
the
battery
with
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more than one hour to get a
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status. And many
people
had
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their accommodation
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condominium
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or
apartment
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without
personal
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a personal
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EV
charger
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chargers
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. They must
to
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charge their
EV
car
in
gas
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a gas
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station
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stations
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with
a
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only two or three charging platforms so it
make
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makes
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a lot of
unconvinience
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inconvenience
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to
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their users because
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they must to
waiting
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for only one charge
at
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outside
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their
living area.
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, if
EV
cars
have a lower
price
than
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petrol
cars
, it can make
easier
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it easier
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to desire for
a
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new
customer
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customers
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to buy
thier
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their
new
vehilce
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vehicle
, but in case of outstanding low
price
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prices
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. The
price
will include a
tax
for
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vehicles
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and some type of
tax
for
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fix
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thier
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their
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pollution
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the nation
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nation
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level, but, if
EV
car
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don't
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doesn't
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have
a
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apply
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polution
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pollution
solution
to emit. The government should reduce the
tax
of
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on
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this
section to convince
thier
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their
people
to
use
a new
car
in
EV
type.
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conclusion that the government should reduce their
polution
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pollution
tax
to increase
a
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attraction demand for
new
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type
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of
vehicle
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vehicles
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like
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car
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and the direct effect when
their
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people
use
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car
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, it will
be reduce
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any
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polution
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pollution
in the same way.
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