Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects of this on society and families?

Everyone has the desire to grow a family. Presently a large number of individuals want to have kids in
later
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stages of their lives.
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grounds and
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various impacts on the community and family life.
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the effects on society and will give a valid conclusion in the end.
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