Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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The evolution of
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is without a doubt one of the most prominent bellwethers of the way
people
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lead their lives nowadays.
Technology
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has found its way
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every aspect of human life
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.
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, the existence of
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cameras
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and other tools designed to monitor
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can be seen as a double-edged sword. The implementation of
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as cell phone tracking and
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cameras
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can be of great help
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the authorities to prevent or solve crimes.
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, the government in my country has found signs
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further
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halted terrorist activities by examining the exchange of messages on a social media platform. Lots of other crimes have
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been brought to justice
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the existence of
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cameras
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for video
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hold very strong power in court.
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, planting
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cameras
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, especially in public places, helps
people
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feel safer and criminals are less likely to strike when they are aware that their actions are being recorded.
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,
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advancement of
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also
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allows other
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to invade
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privacy
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. Cell phone tracking can easily be done by anyone these days, not just
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authority.
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exposes
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to a variety of cybercrimes
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as blackmailing and identity theft through the misuse of data. Acts of using
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to follow
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’s actions without any legal basis is a breach of
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and consent. Societal trust
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authorities that are responsible for
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activities might be impaired
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the wrongdoings of a criminal, and
people
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are bound to feel uncomfortable living with minimum
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. In conclusion, though
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technology
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used to monitor
people
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can be beneficial to heightened
security
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, it can only be done by balancing it with respect to
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’s
privacy
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. Consent must be respected through strong laws that prohibit
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the usage
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of
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technologies for vile purposes.
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