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Some people think that international news is important than the local news. Others argue that local news is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Few people believe that global
news
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 is more mandatory to know than local area
news
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,
however
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, few oppose others and think that local is more needed than universal. On one hand, the Public who concentrates on international
news
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 rather than the local thinks that it's important to know station information because they think having solid knowledge of other
countries
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 is greater than the area where they leave, It's good to know international info because knowing what's happening in those
countries
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 will let you know what's not happening in your country
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, some popular
countries
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 provide very essential things
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 as life and health insurance for the public who pays taxes properly.
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, People who believe local
news
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 is more important than other
countries
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, say that what's going on there is nothing to do with them and believes that the new schemes and benefits that are being implemented out there are not going to help here,
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 these people only give more important to local
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. In my opinion, I think having a neat understanding of local
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 international
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 is better than just having knowledge of one,
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, some other
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' government schemes are similar to the local so that we can check how they are being implemented and useful to public, and second, would be an investment if you know companies which are generating high revenue or sales we can invest in them. In conclusion, it's always good to know the
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 locally and internationally
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 many researchers having knowledge of a single place or thing will not help in the long run.
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