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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullnness of time classroom teachers will betotally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 fast-paced life ,
technology
 takeover every impossible possible. As in the education curriculum advancement provide tremendous opportunities .
However
, the argument state that there is no need for
teachers
 because
technology
 overcomes the situation. I disagree with
this
 observation of
teachers
 which is vital for society. First and foremost,
teachers
 are a major form of medicine for students .
Thus
, physical teaching is fruitful so they can enhance more
knowledge
 and adapt
information
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.
In addition
, there is a strong relationship between
teachers
 and students . For, instance, students enjoyed their studies with seniors , as in online platforms admission do not satisfy with the artificial intelligence teaching style. They don't grasp
full
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knowledge
 which
is fulfil
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is fulfilled
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 by schooling .
Similarly
, in online teaching learners do not join the comfort
zoom
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of zoom
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 with friends, where they can share their thoughts, ideas
knowledge
 and many other things which they learn from their partners for help in their studies.
Moreover
, the substitution of professionals
also
 creates a lack of focus and confidence in education .
Although
, they always motivate children to study hard and dream big. For, example,
the
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American universities considered online teaching is beneficial in only lockdown after a tremendous number of children distract from
studies
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their studies
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 Because they use games and adverse things on the internet.
Whereas
 , offline classes with
teachers
 are important for the growth of children.
however
,
technology
 is vital in other formats like making
assignment
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assignments
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 and learning but tutors build
structure
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the structure
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 of society. In conclusion,
technology
build
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builds
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a
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an
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 easy and adaptable lifestyle
of
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in
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community
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a community
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. As in
education
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the education
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system
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,system
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teachers
 should be major to make a wide change in
knowledge
.
However
, there
are
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is
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 other more source of option where
technology
have
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has
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 a huge
significant
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.
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