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The amount of time children using internet has doubled. Parents should control the amount of time their children spend on the internet. Do you agree?

#amount #time #children #internet #parents #control
it is undeniable that in
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modern
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usage
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internet
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 by young has been increasing day by day.A highly controversial issue today relates to
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whether
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 parents should bound
time
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the time
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 of
usage
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childrean
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children
 in order to restrict their
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children
 from
internet
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 or not .
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 agree with
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. on the one
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 it is true to say that
these day
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 the
use
 and function of
internet
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the internet
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 is very crucial for all young people and
therefore
 every teen should understand their importance.
furthermore
,
internet
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the internet
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 not only
give
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 access to get information
of
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about
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 the world but
also
 aids to do
diffrent
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different
 tasks with the
use
 of
internet
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for instance
 these days most young can easily book tickets for travel
as well as
 entertainment
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without
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 taking help from their parents.
In
addition
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internet
also
 provide
platform
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a platform
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 for learning
of
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, as a result,
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as a result
 any student can learn for any competition exam at home
thus
internet
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 is vital as part of life.
on the other hand
 ,
althoough
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although
internet
have
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 various
benifit
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benefits
benefit
 but the limitation on the
usage
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internet
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 for
childrean
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children
 is equally important owing to various reasons which cause
negetive
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negative
 effect
firstly
,
thesedays
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these days
 mostly teen
use
 social media and there they give heavy
time
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as a result
 they unable to provide
time
 for their studies
as well as
 outdoor sports .to
examplify
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exemplify
 a survey done by the educational department of USA where they found that student who give their greater
time
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internet
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, performs poor on academic. In conclusion ,I
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 how big the importance of
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 of
internet
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 but excessive
use
 of
internet
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the internet
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 is destructive
thus
parent
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parents
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 should fix
time
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the time
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 of
usage
 for
childrean
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children
.
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