In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. What are the reasons for this trend? And what possible solutions could reduce this issue?

It is undeniable that offences committed by young adults are on the rise in our societies. Society as a whole could be blamed for

this

vice being experienced.

This

essay will seek to discuss

provide

Correct word choice

and provide

show examples

possible

Add an article

a possible

show examples

solution

Fix the agreement mistake

solutions

show examples

for

this

issue.

Firstly

, I believe society as a whole plays a crucial role

on

Change preposition

in

show examples

how children are brought up. And, seeing

such

issues of crimes propagated by teenagers reflect badly on us as a whole. That being said, the rise of crimes associated with

teens

, could be

due to

idleness, most

teens

do not have any activities lined up to do after school or on holidays, it's important for both parents and school teachers

provide

Fix the infinitive

to provide

show examples

after school

Add a hyphen

after-school

show examples

activities

such

as sports, clubs which will keep them busy and at the same time

instill

Change the spelling

instil

show examples

some skills and help them build character.

Also

,

family

Add an article

the family

show examples

conflict has contributed greatly to

spike

Correct article usage

the spike

show examples

in crimes

amongst

Change preposition

among

show examples

teens

.

According to

National guidance and

counseling

Change the spelling

counselling

show examples

for young adults, 40% of children from divorced or broken family

background

Fix the agreement mistake

backgrounds

show examples

engage

themselves

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

in one form of crime.

This

could be

due to

lack

Correct article usage

a lack

show examples

of support and

also

lack

Correct article usage

a lack

show examples

of any role models for these

teens

and

thus

engage in

such

vices as a form of

cry

Add an article

a cry

the cry

show examples

for help.

Although

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

technology has been hailed to have improved our lifestyles, it has

also

been reported to have a negative influence on these young impressionable individuals, who are easily swayed by what they see on video games and

also

on movies and are willing to act out what they see. To sum it up, introducing crime prevention programs in schools, guidance and

counseling

Change the spelling

counselling

show examples

and offering good role models will go a long way in

curving

Correct your spelling

curbing

show examples

crime.