Children as young as right own a mobile phone nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Currently, with the advancement of automation, youngsters

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become using

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cell

phone

. There is no denying the fact that the main impact of the

cell

phone

is arguable.

This

essay will discuss both arguments in detail. There are some people who argued that the benefits of having a

phone

at a young age considerably outweigh its disadvantages. public often say that youngsters might need to communicate with their family in

an emergency situations

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.

Therefore

, owning a

phone

might allow

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at

young

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age to contact their parents and inform them directly as they are more prone to some issues like

steeling

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and raping. Indeed,

it is clear that

childrens

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children

children's

required to have a

phone

in order to talk to their family about a disastrous situation.

On the other hand

, in

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of disadvantages, giving a mobile device

for

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kids

can distract them and affect their performance at school.

For instance

, a prestigious journal recently published an article showing that 80% of

kids

who own a

cell

phone

have

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grade

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in most of their school lessons.

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,

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devices can cause distraction and confusion for

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children.

Furthermore

,

cell

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phone

has many programs and games that easily disrupt

kids

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attention. In short,

it is clear that

phones affect

kids

negatively as it makes them perform worse at

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school. In conclusion,both arguments

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merits. On balance,

however

,

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believe that the advantages

outweight

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outweigh

the

demirts

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demerits

.

This

is because

kids

are more vulnerable to kidnaps or any difficult case which required them to directly ask for

help

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of

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their family.