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Children as young as right own a mobile phone nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Currently, with the advancement of automation, youngsters
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 become using
a
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cell
phone
. There is no denying the fact that the main impact of the
cell
phone
 is arguable.
This
 essay will discuss both arguments in detail. There are some people who argued that the benefits of having a
phone
 at a young age considerably outweigh its disadvantages. public often say that youngsters might need to communicate with their family in
an emergency situations
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emergency situations
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.
Therefore
, owning a
phone
 might allow
childrens
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 at
young
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 age to contact their parents and inform them directly as they are more prone to some issues like
steeling
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and raping. Indeed,
it is clear that
childrens
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children
children's
 required to have a
phone
 in order to talk to their family about a disastrous situation.
On the other hand
, in
term
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 of disadvantages, giving a mobile device
for
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kids
 can distract them and affect their performance at school.
For instance
, a prestigious journal recently published an article showing that 80% of
kids
 who own a
cell
phone
 have
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grade
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 in most of their school lessons.
In other words
,
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 devices can cause distraction and confusion for
the
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children.
Furthermore
,
cell
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phone
 has many programs and games that easily disrupt
kids
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 attention. In short,
it is clear that
 phones affect
kids
 negatively as it makes them perform worse at
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school. In conclusion,both arguments
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 merits. On balance,
however
,
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 believe that the advantages
outweight
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outweigh
 the
demirts
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demerits
.
This
 is because
kids
 are more vulnerable to kidnaps or any difficult case which required them to directly ask for
help
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of
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 their family.
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