When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that when new
buildings
are planned the most significant moment is how this
structure will be used more than their
exterior. I agree that Correct pronoun usage
its
a
functional purpose of Correct article usage
the
building
is important, but at the same Add an article
the building
a building
time
an exterior Add a comma
,time
also
plays a key role.
The functional purpose of the building reflected
primarily in the internal layout. Add a missing verb
is reflected
A
Residential Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
buildings
, a
public and Correct article usage
apply
an
industrial ones have Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
a different layouts
. And how well and qualitatively the internal layout is made depends on how people will feel. If they understand how to use Correct the article-noun agreement
different layouts
a different layout
this
place and it is comfortable to orientate, this
place will be popular and it will be profitably
. Change the word
profitable
For example
, the modern museum Garage in Moscow has the
very thoughtful interior space. People without some problems can find a needed spaceCorrect article usage
a
,
because when visitors came into the entrance area, they see Remove the comma
apply
the
all directions right away.
Remove the article
apply
An
exterior of the Correct article usage
The
buildings
Fix the agreement mistake
building
also
significant, because it has a big influence on Add a missing verb
is also
impression
of the structure . Many people Correct article usage
the impression
in
Change preposition
at
the
first are watching from the side Correct article usage
apply
on
the Change preposition
of
buildings
and then
rate it based only on their appearance. Also
any building needs to be fitted in the environment around it. Especially it is really crucial if speak about a historical part of a city where a lot of old Add a comma
,Also
buildings
. New
structure needs to be appropriate. Add an article
The new
For instance
, the buildings
of Elb
Philharmonic in Hamburg Correct article usage
the Elb
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
the
very expressive facade. Correct article usage
a
It
shape Correct pronoun usage
Its
remind
Change the verb form
reminds
a
wave and is made from glass. Change preposition
of a
This
building located
in the harbour, it is really Add a missing verb
is located
the
good decision.
In conclusion, both Correct article usage
a
a
function of the building and Correct article usage
the
his
interior a really important when Correct pronoun usage
its
building
is Add an article
the building
a building
desighned
.Correct your spelling
designed
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite