The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The three pie charts illustrate the changes in the annual expenditure of one certain UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
It is obvious that the spending on teachers' salaries remained dominant in all three years and that on insurance was kept minimum.
During the three decades, the proportion of total school spending on other workers' salaries
had
experienced a gradual decrease from 28 per Unnecessary verb
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cent
in 1981 to 15 per Use synonyms
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in 2001.
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, the percentage of spending money on furniture and equipment Linking Words
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resources showed a distinct trend in 30 years. The cost of resources experienced a rise from 15 per Linking Words
cent
in 1981 to 20 per Use synonyms
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in 1991, Use synonyms
then
dropped to 9 per Linking Words
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in 2001 Use synonyms
while
that of furniture and equipment decreased at first from 15 per Linking Words
cent
to 5 per Use synonyms
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, Use synonyms
then
soared in next ten years to 23 per Linking Words
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