The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
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The three pie charts illustrate the changes in the annual expenditure of one certain UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. It is obvious that the spending on teachers' salaries remained dominant in all three years and that on insurance was kept minimum. During the three decades, the proportion of total school spending on other workers' salaries
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experienced a gradual decrease from 28 per
cent
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in 1981 to 15 per
cent
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in 2001.
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, the percentage of spending money on furniture and equipment
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resources showed a distinct trend in 30 years. The cost of resources experienced a rise from 15 per
cent
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in 1981 to 20 per
cent
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in 1991,
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dropped to 9 per
cent
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in 2001
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that of furniture and equipment decreased at first from 15 per
cent
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to 5 per
cent
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,
then
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soared in next ten years to 23 per
cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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