IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

The given graph illustrates the teaching hours spent by a teacher in different schools in four different countries in 2001.

The given graph illustrates the teaching hours spent by a teacher in different schools in four different countries in 2001.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The given graph illustrates the teaching
hours
Use synonyms
 spent by a teacher in different schools in four different countries in 2001. The teaching
hours
Use synonyms
 are divided into different parts i.e., primary, lower secondary, and upper secondary. The time spent for upper secondary is highest among the others
while
Linking Words
 the
hours
Use synonyms
 required for primary are the lowest. The first country is Japan, a teacher spends 600
hours
Use synonyms
 on primary education, around 650
hours
Use synonyms
 on lower secondary and nearly 700
hours
Use synonyms
 on upper secondary. The next is Spain, the total time given for teaching is 650
hours
Use synonyms
 for primary, about 750
hours
Use synonyms
 for lower secondary and 900
hours
Use synonyms
 for upper secondary. The working
hours
Use synonyms
 for upper secondary teachers in Iceland are almost equal to Spain. Iceland has the lowest teaching
hours
Use synonyms
 for primary and lower secondary around 590 and 600 respectively. The USA has the highest time spent by a teacher, Americans spend 650
hours
Use synonyms
 on primary education, 1000
hours
Use synonyms
 on lower secondary and 1190
hours
Use synonyms
 on upper secondary education.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Add more linking words.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: