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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons.

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Education is one of the characteristic fields that design our future from beginning to school. Recent researches reveal that
children
 who go to boarding
schools
 %
20
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 successful compared to their friends. Is it the best thing for
children
 to be part of their families so early?
Firstly
parents
 have to accept that many students have so many distractive things in their life. Sometimes it's hard to struggle with them. In
this
situation
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schools
 with dormitories will be an option for families and their
children
. Some of the restrictions in boarding
schools
 may be helpful for heirs to focus on their academic careers and lectures.
Also
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 some of the dormitories have great social opportunities for their physical improvement and psychological development.
Also
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 friendships are solid as a rock there. After school, lots of students do not consider making additional etudes for their exams and studies but many boarding
schools
 provide
this
 event obligatorily. All of these activities and benefits make boarding
schools
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a great system.
However
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 all systems may have cracks. It is important to realize if these cracks result
with
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 the destruction of the building or not. Many
parents
 have questions about dormitory life
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in
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 early age. The hierarchy between the
children
 starts early years and will be problematic
according to
 their psychological health. And some of them confront oral abuse.
Also
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 lots of
children
 with homesickness is another issue. Experts predict that many addictions start at a young age especially smoking problems,
also
parents
 are aware of that.
To sum
up
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 if the academic career
overweight
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 their healthy growth, boarding
schools
 always be an option. But
parents
 should think about all the details of
this
 system and decide with their
children
. Because
this
 will affect both of their future.
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