Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages .do yoou agree or disagree?
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era, vehicles Add an article
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are
most
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a most
in
almost Change preposition
of
everyones
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everyone's
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, using Fix the agreement mistake
house
car
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a car
have
its benefits but some Correct subject-verb agreement
has
people
disagree to
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with
this
. Around 20 th century onwards, people
not bothering about their savings to buy cars
. Being in family life
a car
play vital
role in Add an article
a vital
life
. In the
below paragraph has explained Change preposition
The
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the advantage
advantage
and disadvantages of Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
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the car
car
.
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cars
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, most of
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apply
individual
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the individual
house
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houses
cars
as we compare to olden
days. Even though Correct article usage
the olden
rate
of price drastically Add an article
the rate
increasing
for each model of Wrong verb form
increased
cars
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car
people
were not bothering
about the cost to purchase. In metropolitan cities, almost all take Wrong verb form
bothered
cars
to go office. In order to avoid traffic and pollution, private companies were providing cab facilities but still people
refusing
to Wrong verb form
refused
transport
. In order to make comfortable themselves choosing Correct pronoun usage
themselvestransport
own
vehicle, undoubtedly person itself creating pollution in busy traffic Correct pronoun usage
their own
life
style. Therefore
, people
becoming
lazy and themselves stopping to walk even for Wrong verb form
become
small
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a small
distance
. Fix the agreement mistake
distances
Currently
as we Add a comma
,Currently
seen
in newspapers, students were drunk and drive in cities and creating Add a missing verb
have seen
major
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a major
accident
. Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
Hence
the usage of Add an article
the car
car
must be controlled by youngsters, and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
also
pollution
rate increasing day by day. Correct article usage
the pollution
Thus
, people
itself
reason for making Correct pronoun usage
themselves
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disadvantaged
of
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apply
cars
.
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own Change the word
your
cars
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car
very
important in Add a missing verb
is very
case
of family Correct article usage
the case
life
. Any
emergency cases like if someone Change preposition
In any
not
well Add a missing verb
is not
in
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at
home
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the home
a home
instead
of calling and waiting
an ambulance, having a Add the preposition
forwaiting
car
could support us to reach hospitals for immediate treatment to get. During holidays, people
having cars
in house
will plan Add an article
the house
a trips
and make the time adjustment whenever they want to visit their destination. Correct the article-noun agreement
a trip
trips
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, need not to
adjust public transport timings to travel anywhere. Fix the infinitive
apply
Hence
, using cars
having
its more advantage. Wrong verb form
has
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, its usage found
more valuable than comparing its disadvantage.
In summary, using Add a missing verb
was found
cars
found advantage
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advantages
disadvantage
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disadvantages
according to
there
requirements. But in my opinion, it seems to have more Correct your spelling
their
useful
in everybody'sReplace the word
use
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lifestyle
life
style as per present generation mode or living habit
.Fix the agreement mistake
habits
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