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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bab for the environment. What damage does plasgic do to the environment? What can be done by governments qnd individuals to solve ghis problem?

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Non-biodegradable items are causing a hilarious hazard to the atmosphere.
As a result
, a number of global issues have cropped up.
This
 essay shall discuss both in detail and provide a logical conclusion.
To begin
 with,
plastic
 items are not degradable and cause harm to life under the soil. To add
further
, the disposal of these
waste
 products in the city is another cause of concern. If these products are dumped in oceans, they will kill aquatic life. To exemplify, there are more than 2000 tons of
plastic
waste
 material in
US
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the US
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 and they can not find appropriate disposal
site
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sites
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.
On the other hand
, the government should encourage its citizens to
dispose
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waste
 materials in proper places like rubbish pits.
Furthermore
, the government should enforce strict laws to ensure
plastic
waste
 is thrown only in
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the dustbin
a dustbin
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dustbin
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dustbins
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. Responsible citizens should spread awareness to
low-status
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the low-status
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 public about the
varagies
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garages
 of mishandling of
plastic
jtems
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items
stems
. To cite an example, in Sydney, there was a campaign to clean the city, and fortunately, it became
world's
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 cleanest city.
To conclude
,
it is clear that
plastic
 disposal is important for the future of mankind's survival on Earth. The government and masses have to play a significant role towards
this
 cause, if not, the environment will soon be inhabitable.
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