The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs display the proportions of households using electric machines and
also
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
hours
per week devoted to houseworks
from 1920 to 2019. Correct your spelling
housework
house works
Overall
, it is possible to notice the upward trend in usage
of various electric machines over the observed period Correct article usage
the usage
as well as
decline
in the amount of time spend on Add an article
a decline
the decline
houseworks
.
In 1920 almost no one owned Correct your spelling
housework
house works
Correct article usage
a refrigirator
refrigirator
. Correct your spelling
refrigerator
refrigerators
However
, the percentage of homes with refrigiratore
grew rapidly to 90 % in 1960 and in 1980 everyone used Correct your spelling
refrigerators
refrigerator
Correct article usage
a refrigirator
refrigirator
, Correct your spelling
refrigerators
this
has not changed until 2019. The usage of vacuum
rose gradually from 30 % in 1920 to 100 % in 2000 and remained at the same level Fix the agreement mistake
vacuums
also
in 2019. The wasching
machine, which had the highest proportion - 40 % - among other devices in 1930, did not Correct your spelling
washing
experienced
a significant increase in usage. The growth Change the verb form
experience
stoped
in 1960, when it Correct your spelling
stopped
then
, in 1980, experienced a dip to around 65 %. In 2019, the percentage of housholds
using washing Correct your spelling
households
machine
was around 75 %.
The number of Fix the agreement mistake
machines
hours
spend on house related
tasks fall Add a hyphen
house-related
dramaticly
Correct your spelling
dramatically
during
1920 to 1960, in numbers from 50 to 20 Change preposition
from
hours
. Then
it declined very slowly to 10 hours
in 2019.Submitted by jakub.laza23 on
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