The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram describes whole the process of producing

sugar

from

sugar

canes

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cane

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. In total, there are 7 stages of production, starting from growing the

sugar

canes up to a

ready to consume

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ready-to-consume

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sugar

.

Firstly

,

sugar

cones

needs

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need

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to be grown,

this

usually takes one to one and a half years. When they are fully grown, either a specifically designed machine

harvest

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harvests

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them or it is done by hand – each

sugar

cone is

cutted

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cut

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with a blade slightly above the ground. The collected

sugar

cones are

then

crushed using a special

wheel powered

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wheel-powered

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machine,

this

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which

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produces a juice, which is purified by employing

limestone

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a limestone

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filter. By applying heat to the filtered juice, in an evaporator,

it

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apply

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removes liquidity and transforms it into

a

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apply

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syrup. Which is put into

centrifuge

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a centrifuge

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that is

able to disentangle

sugar

crystals from the syrup. In the

last

step, the

sugar

is dried and cooled in a special barrel.