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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of unisex school

#unisex #school
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While
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 some people consider that
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 studying in single-gender
schools
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 are able to perform well in their academics, many argue that co-education
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 is better for a child's social development. In
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 essay, we shall discuss some of the benefits and drawbacks of same-sex education. It is often considered by many that children will be able to focus more on their academics and career when studying in a single-sex
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 as there will be fewer distractions compared to mixed
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.
Students
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, especially teenagers, tend to lose interest in their studies. They get attracted by the opposite sex and get stuck in early relationships. Classrooms of same-gender
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 avoid
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. It
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 decreases gender stereotypes. Teachers are
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 able to provide proper teaching techniques as the way of learning is often quite different in boys and girls. They are
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 able to bring more discipline to their pupils.
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, mixed
schools
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 are gaining a lot of popularity these days. Even though all-girls or all-boys classes create a relaxed and comfortable environment, it is different in the real world where men and women have to interact and work with each other. Since they are used to interacting only with the same gender, it creates awkwardness and people feel uncomfortable being around the other gender. It
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 creates a feeling of insecurity. In conclusion,
schools
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 play a key role in the social development of a child. Whether studying in a mixed
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 or a single-gender
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, it is important to keep the
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 focused on their academics and career
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 developing their social skills. Institutions should conduct inter-
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 competitions and try to reduce gender-based competition.
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