After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to you, to express my gratitude for the effort you have put in to look after

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post my accident. My name is Anokhi and I stay in Mississauga. I met with an accident

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I was returning back from Walmart on Saturday evening. Only after gaining consciousness, I came to know that, you had taken very good care of me after the accident. I am very thankful and am falling short of words to express my feelings. I was extremely touched to see that humanity exists even today and people do step up to help each other. You are an inspiration to me and my family. It would be my absolute pleasure to host a dinner for you and your family at my place.

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, my family is looking forward to seeing you. They

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wish to express their gratitude in person. I

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request you to please come over to my house for dinner on Monday evening

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your family. Yours faithfully, Anokhi Desai

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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176 words

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Some people think that children can learn about history by visiting museums, while others feel that there are better ways to learn about history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with students behavior. What do you think are the reasons for this? What solution can be suggest?

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal, some.people , however ,think that other tips of progress are equally important for country . Discuss both of the view and give your opinion ?