Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?
Nowadays, many
people
think that money
is important, and this
is an essential factor in promoting happiness.
On the one hand, money
can solve any problem and help in a difficult situation. Furthermore
, necessary things for life also
cost a lot of money
. For someone, happiness is shopping, for other people
collecting expensive cars, also
, some people
prefer to travel for enjoyment. People
can realize these things if they have cash. For example
, according to
an Oxford University report, the most successful people
live in the USA, Germany, and France. The reason for that is
a high salary. So, this
fact about money
is true.
On the other hand
, if humans have money
but do not have friends or family to spend money
with, those humans cannot achieve joy fluently. Furthermore
, some humans prefer to achieve joy just by watching films and eating snacks, or doing what they like. For instance
, according to
Cambridge University students
interviews, 67% of them already succeed and continue to live with happiness without enough Change noun form
student's
students'
money
. All of them have their ways to live with satisfaction.
To sum up
, money
is not always important. Also
, pupils cannot live without finances. So, we need to use all of these ways to accomplish pleasure.Submitted by ina1_95 on
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