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Some individuals view music as a great means of uniting people of diverse cultural backgrounds and ages together. This essay completely agrees with this opinion because it not only improve human relationships but also play therapeutic roles

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Some
people
 believe that
music
 plays a significant role as a connector between different cultures and age groups; meanwhile, it can be used as a medicinal resort to cure or lessen ailments. I will talk about
music
 and its influence on human lives.
Music
 paves the way for friendship and brotherhood among nations through the effect on their souls.
For example
, having been impressed by a song,
people
 decided to find lyrics, and
subsequently
, individuals get acquainted with miscellaneous cultures and languages, and
accordingly
, they will find participation, and it leads to satisfaction by achieving the most important latent need which is communication.
For instance
,
people
 are seeking to find and corporate with other
people
 in the world and when they know more they will be satisfied.
Music
 has emerged from deep down in humanity, and mankind has the same nature, and darkness never ousts light in their hearts which means that they are attracted by the kindness of nature.
Additionally
, stress lays the foundation of mental az physical disorders in our bodies. So, having passed throw darkness, humans feel free and prosperity comes true and they don't feel stressed out. when you feel relaxed your body organs work
as well as
 before and infirmities never ever appear. None word songs would relieve your pains, if you communicated with them, by realising endorphins. in conclusion,
music
 and song have a manifest impression on communicating between countries, and
moreover
, by decreasing stress levels, it can prevent lots of diseases
such
 as heart and mental disease.
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