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Some people think that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writing can be stored electronically. Others think that printed books still play important roles. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the digital era, some
people
 read and write something on their gadgets or tablets because it brings a lot of benefits.
However
, others say that printed
books
 feel more real and effective to be used. In
this
 essay, I will go into both views and explain why I feel traditional
books
 are still necessary and play important roles.
To begin
 with, in the internet
era
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people
 will
use
 their phones or laptop to do almost their all activities. Technology brings a
lot
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oflot
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 advantages to make
people
’s life easier.
People
 can read a
book
 through their phones anytime and anywhere. It feels more effective and efficient when we can open a
book
 just with one touch.
Furthermore
, e-
books
 will support our environment clean and eco-friendly.
For instance
,
people
 can read a
book
 online
while
 they are on public transportation or just check some important information in their bookmarks.
On the other hand
, some
people
 still
use
 traditional
books
 when they have to read something.
The paper
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book
 brings important roles in our lives because it feels more real than a traditional
book
. Other than that, some
people
 think it is important to read traditional
books
 to get genuine knowledge.
For example
, for
kindergarten
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 it is important to
use
 printed
books
 as tools for the teaching process. Children can see colour, shape, and size, so they can visualize in their minds.
Thus
, it is essential for children to cope
this
 with. In conclusion, both digital
books
 and printed
books
 are necessary for
people
. We have to
use
 them to maximize their own advantages.
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