Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

The judicial system is intended to help reintegrate criminals

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normal and civilized

life

through a constant

process

of vigilance and control in places

such

as prisons.

However

, many

offenders

retake the criminal path and even uses the jail itself to

recruite

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recruit

new criminal ‘employees’.

This

process

can be explained because

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are strong incentives to keep doing crimes and the institutions are not doing enough to reintegrate the convicted into

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civilian

life

. The prisons and the judicial system

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are rarely seen as places where you can change your

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defective

life

, on the opposite, it

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that they are more focused

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the revenge

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the

offenders

rather than the proper reparation to the victims and the

reedemption

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redemption

of the

perpetuators

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.

In addition

, crime is well paid, at least in the short run and

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easy access,

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especially

for low-income people with

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of real opportunities. If there is not a

process

of proper reintegration and the only way to gain respect and money is through a

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detective

selective

delicate

life

, there is

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doubt that a large percentage of the

offenders

will

comit

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commit

more crimes after the first punishment. There are various factors that can help to reduce the rate of crimes after the first punishment. One idea could be

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workplaces where the

offenders

, after

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fulfilled

the punishment and

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good conduct, can work and have a well-earn paycheck. Another idea might be a

process

of reparation directly to the victim or the family, the idea of pardon from the person who was affected will

surelly

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surely

have a positive impact

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the self-esteem of the

agressor

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aggressor

.

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, it is important to rethink about what is the role of justice in

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society,

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whether

it is only to take

revange

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revenge

or if it can help us improve and advance together as brothers and sisters. Diferents countries are now taking

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different

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to

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such

problems, and some of them are using an

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holistic

one, considering the long run and the

wellfare

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welfare

of everyone. We need to reduce the stick and increase the carrot.