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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. What are the reasons for this movement? Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city.

#people #cities #search #life #city #movement #difficulties
In the
last
 few years we have seen a
lot
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people
 moving from rural areas to big
cities
 searching for a better
life
;
however
, adapting to
city
life
 can be very difficult and stressful. In
this
essay
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 I will try to find out why
people
 decide to change and the difficulties related to
city
life
. In
this
 ,world
people
's needs are changing very fast. Finding a job in small towns is becoming very difficult for young adults, so they are forced to move to big
cities
, where usually big companies
such
 as Microsoft or Google have their headquarters, trying to apply for a place.
In addition
, in big ,
cities
 you can get to know a
lot
 of new
people
, with different cultures and knowledge, and
this
 may impact your way of seeing
life
;
this
 aspect reminds me of one of my closest friends, who is from Germany, that during
last
 year helped me see the world through different eyes.
On the other hand
, new movers can find some difficulties like finding a place to stay; in fact, renting a house in a metropolis can be very expensive and very hard to find with no references,
for example
 in Milan you can hardly find a house for less than seven hundred euros.
Moreover
, youngsters that are used to a rural mentality can be a little stunned by what a large
city
 can offer in terms of the rhythm of
life
. In conclusion, I think moving to
cities
 can be a good thing only if you have some references or if you already know someone in the
city
 that can help you with a job or an apartment,
otherwise
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 you will struggle a
lot
 facing a
lot
 of difficulties as the rent or getting used to
city
 rithms.
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