Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

School is

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place of learning. Different

subjects

are being taught in

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schools nowadays. These

subjects

range from Science, Maths to

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extracurriculars

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like Dance, Painting and many more.

This

is a debatable topic that some people consider

art

subject

is of no use

while

other think it is of utmost importance for the children. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views

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this

statement and

conclusion

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the conclusion

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at the end

. On the

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hand,

Art

subject

is invaluable because it brings

creativity

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the creativity

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of

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children. They show their hidden talent by learning

arts

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the arts

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. It enhances motor skills, coordination and perseverance. Youngsters vent out their stress

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the major

subjects

by giving their time to arts like music, dance,

painting

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and painting

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. They get refreshed and more capable of learning and concentrating on the major

subjects

.

Moreover

, some

students

develop their interest in these arts

subjects

and

gets

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motivated to choose them as their career which makes them earn their livelihood in future. They get away from the rat race of becoming

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, engineer which has cut-throat competition and becomes successful in other fields. Contrary to

this

, some

students

do not have any interest in these

art

subjects

. They just want to prioritize the major

subjects

. They want to explore more in their mains. For them,

art

classes are of devoid any use. They have to attend these classes forcefully which is not suitable for them.

In addition

to

this

, sometimes

students

lack their focus on the main

subjects

as they give more importance to

art

subject

.

This

adversely

affect

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their marks and they could not get passed in their final exams. These major

subjects

are

also

significant for them to pursue any

further

higher studies.

To conclude

, I think

art

subject

should not be made compulsory for all

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students

. It should be an optional one so that if the student has an interest , he or she can opt for it.