The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The village of Ryemouth´s map reveals the changes in the town from 1995 to the present day.
Overall
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it is clear that
developed from a small agricultural town to a larger and more commercial city.
The most noticeable development was the forest park and the farmland to the east of the housing, which was cleared and replaced with a golf course and a terminal.
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also
was built a new street in the northwest of the town, Linking Words
while
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street
more housing was constructed.
In the city south, the fish market suffered a remarkable change, where the pier, used as a fishing port, and the market was removed and that sector became an accommodation area. At the present, we can see several apartments and restaurants Add a comma
,street
instead
of the fishing markets and shops.
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Furthermore
, in the southeast of the village, the hotel added a big car park, Linking Words
although
the café seems to stay the same as before.Linking Words
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