The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given maps show the Queen Marry Hospital and How its structure has evolved over the years since its construction in 1960.
Overall
, the Hospital has changed a lot in the
last
Four decades of
19th
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the 19th
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century from one building to acquiring the whole complex, in ,
addition
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added
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every 20 years there is a change in the plan from 1960 to 2000. now it has Cancer
Centre
,Nursing School too
initially
these were not part of the institution. In 1960 hospital has one building ,car parking on its back side, farmland and a shopping
centre
to the left side of the hospital
on the other hand
at the beginning of 1980 there are drastic changes in the structure shopping
centre
has been demolished and Cancer
Centre
is built in place of the shopping
centre
.nursing school has replaced the whole farmland in the
last
hospital has expanded now it has a pharmacy integrated into it. At the beginning of year 20th century year
2000
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there is a slight change in structure Cancer Center expanded
although
the nursing school has reduced its area and car parking too
However
the hospital remains still there not changed an inch.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructural evolution
  • healthcare facilities
  • technological advancements
  • capacity expansion
  • modernization efforts
  • historical layout
  • landscape adaptation
  • access routes
  • renovation and improvement
  • initial structure
  • environmental considerations
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