The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given maps show the Queen Marry Hospital and How its structure has evolved over the years since its construction in 1960.

Overall

, the Hospital has changed a lot in the

last

Four decades of

19th

Correct article usage

the 19th

show examples

century from one building to acquiring the whole complex, in ,

addition

Replace the word

added

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every 20 years there is a change in the plan from 1960 to 2000. now it has Cancer

Centre

,Nursing School too

initially

these were not part of the institution. In 1960 hospital has one building ,car parking on its back side, farmland and a shopping

centre

to the left side of the hospital

on the other hand

at the beginning of 1980 there are drastic changes in the structure shopping

centre

has been demolished and Cancer

Centre

is built in place of the shopping

centre

.nursing school has replaced the whole farmland in the

last

hospital has expanded now it has a pharmacy integrated into it. At the beginning of year 20th century year

2000

Add a comma

,2000

show examples

there is a slight change in structure Cancer Center expanded

although

the nursing school has reduced its area and car parking too

However

the hospital remains still there not changed an inch.

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructural evolution
healthcare facilities
technological advancements
capacity expansion
modernization efforts
historical layout
landscape adaptation
access routes
renovation and improvement
initial structure
environmental considerations

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