The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given maps show the Queen Marry Hospital and How its structure has evolved over the years since its construction in 1960.

Overall

Linking Words

, the Hospital has changed a lot in the

last

Linking Words

Four decades of

19th

Correct article usage

the 19th

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century from one building to acquiring the whole complex, in ,

addition

Replace the word

added

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every 20 years there is a change in the plan from 1960 to 2000. now it has Cancer

Centre

Use synonyms

,Nursing School too

initially

Linking Words

these were not part of the institution. In 1960 hospital has one building ,car parking on its back side, farmland and a shopping

centre

Use synonyms

to the left side of the hospital

on the other hand

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at the beginning of 1980 there are drastic changes in the structure shopping

centre

Use synonyms

has been demolished and Cancer

Centre

Use synonyms

is built in place of the shopping

centre

Use synonyms

.nursing school has replaced the whole farmland in the

last

Linking Words

hospital has expanded now it has a pharmacy integrated into it. At the beginning of year 20th century year

2000

Add a comma

,2000

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there is a slight change in structure Cancer Center expanded

although

Linking Words

the nursing school has reduced its area and car parking too

However

Linking Words

the hospital remains still there not changed an inch.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 5 times.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructural evolution
healthcare facilities
technological advancements
capacity expansion
modernization efforts
historical layout
landscape adaptation
access routes
renovation and improvement
initial structure
environmental considerations

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