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Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Few
individual
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 finds that boxing is regarded as
blood
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a blood
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 sport which seldom consequences in physical body damage. Personally, I disagree with the statement that it particularly focuses on violence and
crime
sydication
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syndication
.
This
 essay will shed light on the view and provide anecdotal evidence to prove the arguments. On the prime view of
this
 argument,
a
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large proportions of sporters survive with Residual Concussive Symptoms. To be more specific, boxers could have
to
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suffer
with
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 diverse factors
such
 as dizziness, headaches, loss of concentration, memory issues etc. To cite an example, in 1930, the
wel-known
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well-known
 champion, Frankie Campbell,
who
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tragically died against Max Baer in the
olympic
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Olympic
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 championship.
Thus
, boxing can only encourage chronic violence outside the ring, which has
power
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 to destroy individual life and
it
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also
 imposed
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it to
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to
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 their loved ones too.
Furthermore
, boxing
also
 influences
to
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crime
 syndications. Sporters get exploited by promoters and boxing managers, which is unworthy
for
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 their future
endosements
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endorsements
endorsement
. In the other words, Fighters are easy targets for the
crime
 syndicate.
Moreover
, financial exploitation plays a crucial role in boxing competitions and their income totally
depend
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depends
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 too much on
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the fights
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fights
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fight's
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 outcome.
For instance
, in 1800, in
world
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the world
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 championship, Jimmy Doyle died in
boxing
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a boxing
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 competition and his family suffered
with
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from
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 unemployment.
Lastly
, I recommend that
boxing
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the boxing
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 association must follow strict rules and regulations
under
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in
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ring
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the ring
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.
To sum up
, boxing game leads to violence,
crime
 syndication and physical body damage.
Therefore
, I still disagree with the view. Meanwhile, critics and boxing
association
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associations
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 must
aware
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be aware
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 of
rules
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the rules
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 and should provide advanced precautions for fighters.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • blood sport
  • physical injury
  • inappropriate
  • modern age
  • violent
  • serious injuries
  • civilized
  • dangerous
  • sporting activities
  • promoting health
  • well-being
  • encouraging violence
  • culture of aggression
  • harm
  • alternative forms
  • combat sports
  • safety
  • skill
  • banning
  • regulating
  • protect athletes
  • unnecessary harm
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