Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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finds that boxing is regarded as

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sport which seldom consequences in physical body damage. Personally, I disagree with the statement that it particularly focuses on violence and

crime

sydication

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syndication

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argument,

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large proportions of sporters survive with Residual Concussive Symptoms. To be more specific, boxers could have

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suffer

with

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diverse factors

such

as dizziness, headaches, loss of concentration, memory issues etc. To cite an example, in 1930, the

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well-known

champion, Frankie Campbell,

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tragically died against Max Baer in the

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championship.

Thus

, boxing can only encourage chronic violence outside the ring, which has

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to destroy individual life and

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also

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to

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their loved ones too.

Furthermore

, boxing

also

influences

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crime

syndications. Sporters get exploited by promoters and boxing managers, which is unworthy

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their future

endosements

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endorsements

endorsement

. In the other words, Fighters are easy targets for the

crime

syndicate.

Moreover

, financial exploitation plays a crucial role in boxing competitions and their income totally

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too much on

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fights

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outcome.

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, in 1800, in

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championship, Jimmy Doyle died in

boxing

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competition and his family suffered

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unemployment.

Lastly

, I recommend that

boxing

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association must follow strict rules and regulations

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ring

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To sum up

, boxing game leads to violence,

crime

syndication and physical body damage.

Therefore

, I still disagree with the view. Meanwhile, critics and boxing

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must

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of

rules

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and should provide advanced precautions for fighters.