Some people use social media to keep in touch with Other people and news events. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages.

There is no denying the fact that the main purpose of social media is debatable. Some communities argue that social

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may help in keeping societies in contact and update them with the new

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. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I am going to examine

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question from both points of view and

then

explain my opinion. There are people who argue that the benefits of

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community considerably outweigh it is demerits. The main reason for believing

this

is that social

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may increase

populations bond

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population bonds

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and

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them feel more social.

For instance

, the social

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websites

can help immigrants to see their families

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virtually

even though their relatives live in another part of the world.

Therefore

, Using social

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may help

public

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to not feel alone. Indeed,

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makes it clear that social

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has many positives to people's

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.

On the other hand

, others believe that the use of social

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may

cause

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more harmful to societies. populations often have

this

opinion because

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the social

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platform

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may increase

distaction

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distraction

and

prevents

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prevent

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people

to perform

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from performing

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their jobs effectively. To illustrate, a prestigious journal article published a study

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that 50% of teenagers who use the

internet

on

regular

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basis tend to fail in their exams.

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long

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terms

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, networkers

becomes

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addictors

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addicted

to social

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websites

.

Thus

, it becomes apparent that social

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might cause more harm to the population. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,

however

, I feel that the demerits of social

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outweigh the merits.

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is because

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negative impact on

the

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internet

users which resulted in

internet

addiction and neglecting the main job tasks.