Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spend travelling to work its to replace parks and garden close to the centre with appartments building for commuter but others disagree .Discuss both the view and give your opninon??

In the cut-throat , competition everyone is tired from their hectic schedule and lifestyle,in the temple garden and

parks

are the best spot to relax and spend

time

with themselves

as well as

with their kith and kin.Some people believe that it's better to replace

gardens

and

parks

with residential buildings whilst some are against the writer's notion.In

this

essay,I will discuss both the ideology and I will give my perspective in the trailing paragraph. On the one hand, there are myriad causes behind why

gardens

and

parks

are pro mounts because they save

time

for commuters and they get more opportunity to spend golden

time

with their family and friends .,

Moreover

they pursue their hobby.

Secondly

,

due to

more commercial ,building they get new and more employment

therefore

economic growth will be inclined.

Last

but not the least ,

due to

less travelling people are more energetic and fresh

therefore

they delivered work very potentially and error-free.

On the other hand

,there are several reasons that

gardens

and

parks

should not be replaced by residential and commercial buildings.

Firstly

, in the present ,era everyone is tired

due to

their job and they need to spend some with peace place

then

gardens

and

parks

are the best places for that.,

Moreover

air pollution will decline

due to

trees and turf and

also

due to

greenery.In ,addition masses can take fresh air.,

Furthermore

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gardens

and

parks

are the best places for various age groups

such

as it's important to children for their outdoor activities

as well as

for elders and for youngsters it promotes exercise and spending quality

time

with their loved ones. To wrap up

this

discussion, having trees and turf around might increase travel

time

but not having them will have detrimental effects not only on the environment but human lives too. so from my ,

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perspective

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it's mandatory to have

parks

and

gardens

as it will keep oneself healthy .