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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Human
society
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 is changing rapidly and
core
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values
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such
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 as honour, trust and kindness are not as important as they use to be. It is believed by many that
money
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 has replaced those
core
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 human
values
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 and
people
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 are now analysed by their status. I partially agree with
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 point of view and believe that still there are some areas where humanity does matter
instead
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 of
money
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.
To begin
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 with, there is no doubt that the way
people
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 live is now changed a lot and the most visible change in
society
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 is its hunger towards
money
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. Everyone in the world is after
money
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 and
due to
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this
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 fact
people
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 are now making connections with whom their status matches.
For example
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, nowadays,
people
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 judge others based on their appearance and
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 give them treatment based on their judgement. Because of
this
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money
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-driven
society
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, there are many other serious problems are raising like extremism and polarization.
On the contrary
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, though
society
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 is changing rapidly and
core
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 human
values
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 are not as important still there are some places where
core
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values
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 matter.
For instance
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, when hiring an employee a recruiter does not focus on the candidate's status or wealth but his skills are checked.
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, there are still many
people
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 in
society
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 who value a human rather than
money
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.
To conclude
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, it is true that
society
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 has changed a lot and is now driven by
money
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. But still, there are instances and
people
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 in
this
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 world who value the
core
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 aspects of being human.
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