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In the future, nobody will buy printed paper or books because they will becomplete able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The invention of the computer and the
internet
 in the 21st century has changed the human way of living. A decade ago
people
 were trained to
use
 hard
copies
 of books but now with everything available on the
internet
, many
people
 are now using the
internet
 to read the
content
instead
 of using paper
copies
. With
this
 rising trend, some
people
 believe that in future no one will
use
 books to read but they will read through soft
copies
. I agree with the aforementioned statement.
This
 essay will explain the reasons.
To begin
 with, technology has changed a lot in human life. Specifically, with the invention of the
internet
 everything is now available on the
internet
 and there is no need to buy hard
copies
 of books.
For example
, there was a trend to read newspapers on a physical copy of it. But now many
people
 have switched to the online version of a newspaper. Nowadays, though, many
people
 have switched to soft
copies
 but still, there is a huge chunk which still prefers to
use
 hard
copies
.
For instance
, my father prefers to read newspapers in hard copy.
Secondly
, the world is now facing a huge problem of pollution and paper's contribution to it is huge. As per one study, US offices
use
 12.1 trillion sheets per day. So, when
people
 will start using soft
copies
 to read
content
 less paper will be consumed and it will have a positive impact on the environment.
To conclude
, with the invention of the
internet
, most
people
 started to
use
 soft
copies
 for reading
content
. I believe
this
 trend will continue and eventually, the world will be using a negligible amount of hard
copies
 to produce
content
.
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