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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

#overpopulation #centers #world
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recent years, major cities have seen an influx of people from
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rural areas. Recent studies of 2021
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, in search
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 a better life, year-on-year people
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 their dwellings and relocate to major cities across India. It is crucial to understand why
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 following paragraphs will focus on these issues. The major contributor to
this
 inflow is the economic and infrastructure in-balance between the urban and rural
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. As there are fewer job opportunities in
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underdeveloped areas it has a direct impact on
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persons
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 livelihood.
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 income. The study highlights, since 2001, every year there is a 53% surge
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 population in Bombay, India.
This
 influx places tremendous pressure on the city’s infrastructure,
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 care system and
also
 results in
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 cost of living. In the wake to control
this
 exponential inflow in metropolitan like Bombay, the Maharashtra state government needs to act immediately. The local authorities need to encourage, major
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 to
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 mega factories in
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rural areas and incentivise them by allocating grants.
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 a source of livelihood, but
also
 improve their standard of living.
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 transition will aid infrastructures like healthcare, telecommunication and other
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 business to flourish.
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, there are other various factors contributing to the issue. But, I believe, it needs to start somewhere. By implementing these measures the current issue can be addressed and can avoid
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Infrastructure
  • Population density
  • Urban sprawl
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  • Renewable energy
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