The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart compares the amount of
time
for
travelers
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who come from China, America, Turkey, and Brazil to do activities on holiday in Greece in August 2019. The activities include going to the beach, reading
books
, and visiting places.
Overall
, the
tourists
spent the most
time
reading
books
while
they spent the least
time
visiting places. There are most of the
time
spent
on
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reading
books
by Chinese people per day.
However
, Brazilian spent the longest
hours
at the beach for 6
hours
per day. Chinese
tourists
spend 8
hours
reading
books
while
Americans only spend 5
hours
.
On the contrary
, both Turkish and Brazilian
tourists
only take 5
hours
to read. 3
hours
spend on visiting attractions for American and Turkish
travelers
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,
whereas
people from Brazil and China only spend 2
hours
and 1 hour on
this
kind of activity respectively. Brazilians spend 6
hours
at the beach.
In contrast
, the number of
hours
that Chinese
tourists
spent
on
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is half of it. Turkish and American spend 5
hours
and 4
hours
respectively.
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