Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Mr John, I am writing to express my interest in enrolling for a computer

course

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your college.

Although

, I have never studied computing officially. I have always taken

great

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interest in learning about

this

skill from every available resource within my capacity. I mostly watch videos on YouTube and

further

carry out my practicals from what I have learnt so far. Fortunately for me, I read about an ongoing enrollment for a computer

course

that struck my attention.

Consequently

, I have made up my mind to pursue my computing dreams.

Also

, it was brought to my notice that

this

course

is specifically available to those who have completed an elementary

course

in computing only .

Due to

this

,news I have been put in total disarray, I have prepared myself greatly for

this

opportunity and I believe I won’t disappoint if I can be given an exception to study.If after my first semester, I did not meet up to expectations, I would not mind my admission being revoked but I can assure you I will come out with flying colours. Thanks for your understanding. Yours sincerely

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