The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph presents how the highest cellular phone brand income changed over a period of 5 years, between 2009 and 2013.
At a glance, there are a number of trends for each of the varieties. Samsung and Nokia are leading the chart sales by being the most purchased phone over three separate years.
Firstly
, Samsung experienced a gradual increase from nearly 250 figures to 450 figures in the year of 2009 until 2013. Moreover
, Apple and ZTE also
presented significant growth reaching a peak in 2013 of 150 and approximately 60, respectively.
On the other hand
, Nokia's customers abruptly dipped by nearly half the proportion from just over 400 became 250 in 2013. Furthermore
, the same trend also
happened to LG where the proportion of buyers fell gradually in a half-decade from more than 100 individuals to 75 persons. Additionally
, this
showed that over the year people were not interested in buying smartphones by these two particular lines.Submitted by regina.christella7 on
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