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In modern society, fashion is becoming more and more popular in people’s choice of clothes. Why? Do you think it is positive development or negative development?

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In recent times,
people
's trend toward
fashion
 has increased dramatically. nowadays population's orientation to purchase
fashion
clothes
 is noteworthy, In
this
 essay, I will outline some reasons that I believe it made the community follow
such
 orientation
as well as
 elucidate why I believe it is a detrimental development. First of all, the social media, social media plays a vital role in every person's life at present time,
hence
, as users explore it they are liable to see advertisements that promote
fashion
 most of the time,
in addition
, the public follows accounts of famous
people
 and imitate them as they the well-known
people
 represent as idols,
hence
, ordinary
people
 tend to wear clothing same as their idols,
moreover
, celebrity peoples are accounted to be the high-level society
in other words
 rich community , so the population especially the youth tend to imitate their lifestyle
as well as
 their
clothes
 which it is, of course, the up-to-date
fashion
 as they are part of the announcements.
furthermore
, a person wears fashionable
clothes
 to show others that he or she is rich somehow as fashionable
clothes
 are expensive most of the time. In my opinion, it is a negative evolution for several reasons, first, poor individuals can not afford
such
clothes
 , which will create inequality in society,
secondly
, I believe individuals should be self-confident and not be influenced by fewer who only concern is financial aspects and nothing more,
Furthermore
,
people
 should spend their money on crucial commodity rather than substantial costly
clothes
. In conclusion, recently,
fashion
 had become a pandemic which spread among the public
as a result
 of many factors including social media as the most effective, to shed light on
this
 development, I think it is a waste of money and has a detrimental impact on society.
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