Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In
this
contemporary
world
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,world
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the
use
of
plastic
has grown considerably more than in the past.
Plastic
products like
bottles
,
bags
and packs which are used by us are harmful
for
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to
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the habitat.
This
essay will examine the damages caused by
plastic
to the environment and solutions to
this
problem. First of all, few people throw
plastic
waste like empty
bottles
,
carry
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and carry
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bags
on the ground or in water bodies,
while
they know that
plastic
does not decompose for years.
For instance
, the
plastic
discarded on land does not decompose and tampers the fertility of
soil
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the soil
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that
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which
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leads to infertile soil or soil pollution, resulting in environmental damage.
Secondly
, the
plastic
which enters rivers or oceans is eaten by underwater creatures which is the reason for most of the damage to the aquatic ecosystem.
Thirdly
,
plastic
when burnt
,
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releases toxins and hazardous chemicals
in
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the environment that causes air pollution.
However
, there are some possible solutions to limit the
use
of
plastic
materials.
Although
plastic
cannot be completely banned, the government should prohibit the
use
of
plastic
bags
, packages and
bottles
beyond the recommended levels.
Moreover
, a fine system should be imposed if
plastic
is not thrown in dustbins and if
plastic
is used by people and
plastic
packaging industries.
In addition
to
this
, the used
plastic
must be recycled. As individuals, we should try to
use
eco-friendly materials and encourage others to take steps towards using
biofriendly
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bio-friendly
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bottles
or reusable cloth
bags
instead
of
plastic
bags
.
Furthermore
, we should recycle the
plastic
by simply discarding them in a separate recycle bin so that the collected
plastic
can be recycled to reuse. In conclusion,
by
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following the government rules for
use
of
plastic
and bringing these little changes of using reusable
bags
and
bottles
in our
day to day
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life can reduce the deterring effects of
plastic
on nature.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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