Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

The excessive amount of sugar in
food
and
drink
products
while
made by numerous manufacturers.
However
, the reason is a lot of health diseases. Several experts said that
products
with cheap prices should be overpriced. I completely disagree with
this
argument and I will discuss it.
To begin
with, making
products
more expensive it's not a good solution.
That is
to say, the number of people who still can buy and consume
food
and
drink
harmful is increased.
For instance
, the best way they can help themselves use
drink
without sugar and eat organic
food
.
Moreover
, when they eat and
drink
healthy
products
, they get sick less.
This
in turn has a positive impact on their body and different aspects of their personal life.
On the other hand
supporters of junk
food
believe that the benefits from them cannot be ignored.
In addition
, another argument
according to
the plan is that the more overpriced
products
will be affected by health issues
such
as the amount of purchase of junk
food
being decreased. To put it differently when the sell fast
food
fall, the level of many diseases is decreased. Take your waist,
for example
, people are less willing to buy these foods.
To sum up
, I disagree with overpriced
food
and
drink
such
as soda and
although
this
issue might need special experts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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