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In recent years more and more people are choosing to read e-book rather than paper books. Do the advantage of e-book outweigh their disadvantage?

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In the 21st century, we can see many changes in the field of book reading in which people spend
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 in
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books
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 rather than conventional paper-based
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. In my opinion,
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 it has more merits than demerits. In
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Firstly
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,
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books
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 are more convenient for
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the modern
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 busy
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 because the reader can use
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them anywhere
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, anytime or he can use
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during travelling.
On the other hand
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, nowadays online
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books
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 are providing thousands of book references in a single click.
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, Amazon
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 new updated edition includes more than 1
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millions
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of
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research studies
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whereas
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people can read it easily without spending hours of time in
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the library
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.
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,
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is time-saving and low-cost
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compared
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 to
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the traditional
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 way of reading because some of the
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 are too expensive to buy and limited edition copies are available.
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,
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the age-old
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 practice of reading
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 brings a special kind
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 towards knowledge gathering. To illustrate
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, my father had more than 1000
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 in his personal library
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which majority of these
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 are contains prescriptions
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 local naturopathy treatments and
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descriptions
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 of medicinal plants.
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,
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 of these
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 are not available in
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 market. So having these
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 are something like a treasure for him.
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, modern technology helped nature
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 ways like millions of trees
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 saved because of the decline of paper industries.
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 ,
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books
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 are one or
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way helped habitat. In conclusion, It is evident that
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books
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 are more reliable than paper-based
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 in terms of
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 usage and practicability.
Therefore
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, it is going to be more influential among future generations.
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